Friday, January 29, 2010

Trying

Fade away
On the day
That you said
You’d always
Stay

Took the time
Just to say
You had no time
On the day
Couldn’t stay

There you sat
On the bus
Hair pulled back
So no fuss
On the way

To the place
You say you work
But you complain
‘bout all the jerks
everyday

And there’s no trace
No tracks of tears
On your face
You could cry
But not today

Bought you roses
In a bunch
Tied in ribbons
I had a hunch
You’d be home

Rang the bell
Tried the door
Peered through the windows
And scanned the floor
I was wrong

Left the flowers
On the front stairs
No note to leave
No real cares
That night.

1 comment:

  1. This reminds of of Thoreau's quote, "Most men lead lives of quiet desperation and go the grave with the song still in them." Why be willing to accept the unfulfilling mundane as our personal reality.

    Were you lonely in the night when you wrote this? It pulls a quiet pain from the reader in a thought-provoking way. Haunting in it banality of image for both the writer and the focus.

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